tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1853643700141057671.post1815365134081406192..comments2013-08-26T10:24:04.978-05:00Comments on Life at OSU: Oh, How I Hate ChangeAmanda Gehreshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01387920027174034249noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1853643700141057671.post-39065087765557679852007-05-06T15:44:00.000-05:002007-05-06T15:44:00.000-05:00Amanda--Fine sentiment, but I would suggest you be...Amanda--<BR/><BR/>Fine sentiment, but I would suggest you be mindful of possible repetition here. Make sure each paragraph has a clear point to it that makes it a unit discernable from the others. Also, be mindful that when you join two independent clauses with a coordinating conjunction ("and," "but" are the main ones here), you need a comma.<BR/><BR/>5/5Cap'n Fatbackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16842687404949367461noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1853643700141057671.post-44558740153919227762007-05-06T15:43:00.000-05:002007-05-06T15:43:00.000-05:00This comment has been removed by the author.Cap'n Fatbackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16842687404949367461noreply@blogger.com